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Open Poetry #28
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ctowen
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0 posted 2003-08-12 07:21 PM

Tracings

the harsh hand of time
caressing, fluffing

Spacings

open blue and prime
bellowing, puffing

so free in the crowds


Gracings

shining rays of gold
blanketing, sleeping

Facings

of you, proud and bold
now raining, weeping

in a bed of clouds

(sorry G-couldn't help myself)

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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2003-08-12 08:45 PM

HI Craig, I like this.
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displaced
2 posted 2003-08-13 01:34 AM

nice imagery...I can relate
MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
3 posted 2003-08-13 03:47 PM

A tight form intricately carved -- I enjoyed the details.

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