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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-12 05:06 PM


A halo of hazy light surrounds my skin..
A metamorphosis,
I am in cocoon, waiting
to hatch.

The flies land upon my face
as I sleep yet..
I am still awake,
dreaming.

I beg for the sun to stay still
today..
I ask for a sign
(show me the way)

A fourth of a candle
Buddha incense holder,
old lava black light
cigarette butt.

invision seraphim
aging christmas light lining..
oh, egg, i am still fetal..
still sleeping:
cocoon.

© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
ctowen
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1 posted 2003-08-12 05:17 PM


What splendor you shall be ...

    ... I, for one, await your arrival!


            (until then, keep GLOWING!)

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2003-08-12 05:27 PM


Kaoru - many thoughts penned, nice write...

BC

paladin
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3 posted 2003-08-12 05:27 PM


Soon you will be a beautiful butterfly.Spread your wings and fly.They are not yet tattered and stained with life.

paladin

....a knight without armor

eminor_angel
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4 posted 2003-08-12 07:48 PM


"oh, egg, i am still fetal..."

I love this line!

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-08-12 08:30 PM


speechless..
inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2003-08-12 11:40 PM


oh, egg, i am still fetal..
still sleeping:
cocoon

still waiting over here too..........

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2003-08-13 01:49 AM


wow...uh...

yeah

QjQ
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8 posted 2003-08-13 02:10 AM


very terrificly thought n penned,,

     


Susan Caldwell
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9 posted 2003-08-13 09:11 AM


Very well done!

Susan

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10 posted 2003-08-13 09:49 AM


i like this very much!
Rf

LeeJ
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11 posted 2003-08-13 10:58 AM


a transidental journey in this write...thank you for sharing
Dark Angel
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12 posted 2003-08-13 05:26 PM


oh, egg, i am still fetal..

Wow, what a line!

Love it all.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


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