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TWENTY OR LESS...#141

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2003-08-12 12:23 PM

TWENTY OR LESS…#141

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon

our planets crossed
and

CRASH

we found
nothing

not love
nor time
nor stars

will interfere
with

life changes

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-08-12 12:33 PM

nice penning,,,

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-08-12 12:35 PM

hmmmm..trying to decide what to make of this...
I am hangin' around while my potato salad is in the makin'

so is this a positive 20 or less? or are we just talkin' fate?

M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (08-12-2003 12:35 PM).]

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-08-12 01:05 PM

great write Mark...

passing shadows
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displaced

4 posted 2003-08-12 01:05 PM

damn

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2003-08-12 08:07 PM

Thanks, Q...

Maureen: Positive is relative... but yes, this deals with issues of fate and inevitability...

Thank you, LeeJ.

passing shadows: You're outdoing yourself.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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