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~*Tantalize*~
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since 2003-07-29
Posts 26
Sunny California (San Francisco Bay Area)

0 posted 2003-08-12 12:07 PM


Hey everyone, this is pretty explanitory, I am missing my friend, I wrote this for him


its amazing how you t ink you know a person
when you see them almost everyday
and its amazing how with just once decision
that can all just go away

I met Todd
almost three years ago today
I worked with him at Diamond
and saw him everyday

We would always mess around
always telling jokes
always smacking and punching eachother
friendly little friendship pokes

He had the biggest smile in the world
the most enchanting eyes
he had a wonderful sense of humor
laughter would bring tears to my eyes

Everytime I see a Raider game Todd
I think of you
Everytime I hear the song "Inside Out"
I think of you
Everyday I sit at work
I think of you
Somehow in everything
I think of you

I wish you would have talked to me
said something to someone
Todd there we so many other options
you shouldn't have chosen the gun

Did you have any idea
what this would do to your friends
couldnt you have found a better answer
then just chosing the end

i have all this anger inside
because you left the reasons a float
you should have said something to us
or even left a note

i miss you so much
i dont know what else to say
i think of all the things we never did
and all the things I didn't say

i never told you i loved you
and that i was thankful you were my friend
I never told you if you needed me
I'd be here until the end

Well here it is the end I guess
at least the end for you
and Im lost inside my own thoughts and feelings
looking for something from you

tell me something to let me know
that you knew how much I loved you
Tell me now you see you were wrong
that there could have been something better to do

Please tell me you see us cry
for this loss we have endured
tell us that you still love us
so our hearts can be assured

I miss you Todd
more than you'll ever know
and I wish show how I could have helped
So you didn't chose to go

"There are moments in my life I will always remember, not because they were big events, but because you were there to make the worth remembering." ~Un

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1 posted 2003-08-12 12:56 PM


sorry about your friend.
good expression of feelings.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-08-12 03:50 PM


Nice expression...always sad to lose someone we care for...James
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