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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2003-08-11 12:51 PM


TWENTY OR LESS…#140

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon


dark
misplaced and buried

by blinding
florescent light

sleep rearranged
and ended

pulled upward and
back into


the world

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2003 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-08-11 01:16 PM


I find different meanings in this one.A soul in darkness being brought back to the world.A problem that in the darkness and with sleep is ended and in the world shines new light.Not sure if that's what you were saying, just my opinion
angelblueyes

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2 posted 2003-08-11 03:36 PM


"sleep rearranged
and ended"

twenty or less... suites you well

MARK V SHELDON
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3 posted 2003-08-12 10:05 AM


Hi Crystal:  That's definitely a possibility...

Ron -- thanks:  I've been practicing...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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