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I will always love you....
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I will always love you.... |
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minoune Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 87Canada |
Times change, circumstances do too and that my love, is why i lost you We loved so much, we held so tight we shared every moment, but never a night and that is why i set you free i just could live without you you made the decision to stay and that i had to accept but it hurt my love we paid such a debt all the words we shared all the things we did but never to be forgotten they are instilled within you are in my heart to stay I will always love you.... minoune |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A heartful piece to which I can relate... the only question I have is in the line: "i just could live without you"... Is this literal or a typo for "couldn't"? A different meaning, either way, and I enjoyed this emotive write. Welcome aboard! -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I could feel your hert in this and know of this feeling.Well written. angelblueyes |
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minoune Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 87Canada |
Yes, it was a typo, sorry bout that.... will double quadruple check it next time *smirk*... Thanks for the input , love it... and angeleyes, glad you could relate to it... thanks for reading.. *hugs* minoune |
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