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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-08-10 06:28 PM



~ ~ ~

my dreamdancer come to me
give me a dance
to send me
gliding across the gazebo floor

give me a chance for romance
tonight
let me hold you tight
and never out of sight until the
dawns light

my hearts romantic rhythm is
swaying in time
with the music of your heart

let are bodies glide as one
as
the music drifts into the night

lets take a chance on romance
and dance me till i trance
yes?

~ ~ ~

    


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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2003-08-10 06:56 PM


Ahhh...
Felt the flush of cheek, behind a shy hand held to the giggle... Wonderful way you did this. TD

Third Libra
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2 posted 2003-08-10 06:58 PM


Yes, very beautiful write. Loved it!

Love is only an excuse to hurt and to get hurt... Knowledge brings ye fear.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-08-10 07:00 PM


But of course you may have this dance!



Very nicely penned Glenn...Hugs, Nancy.

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 2003-08-10 07:03 PM


I love to dance..your poem inspires me to be someones dreamdancer!!!

~Thanks ARH

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5 posted 2003-08-10 09:34 PM


ahh this one sweeps me away , a serenade to the one you love ... dancing your hearts out under the stars thanks for sharing this one
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-08-10 09:54 PM


May you trip the light fantastic across the gazebo floor on a starlit night with the woman of your dreams...

Lovely write! I can picture you now...


EA

JilGirl
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7 posted 2003-08-11 07:18 AM


lets take a chance on romance
and dance me till i trance
yes?

Just WHO do you suppose would be able to say, "No" to this? You charmer, you!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

gringakiwi
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8 posted 2003-08-11 08:20 AM


In all honesty, I would love to dance with you!.... Wow!
Kaoru
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9 posted 2003-08-12 06:45 PM


Ahh..

this is lovely.

whiskey
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10 posted 2003-08-12 07:40 PM


Dancing is so much fun, I really enjoyed this very nice indeed

Julie

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inkedgoddess
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11 posted 2003-08-12 09:46 PM


lets take a chance on romance
and dance me till i trance
yes

dance me till i can dance no more.....
muy bien amigo

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