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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2003-08-10 06:53 AM


             
[This is a special poem written especially for ARH!]


Sitting on an old log, I watch the scarlet poppys dance among the corn,
Like spilled blood on the battlefield,

Raising my sight above the corn,
I spy a speck break the horizon, like sun shining off a shield,

Feelings wash over me, as I watch the speck gradualy grow larger,

Heart unexplicably beating faster, my eyes are glued to the form of the figure,

Coming into view is the heavenly aspect of thy face, I can feel my heart in my throat,

Wearing a floral summer dress, my eyes on you feast,

Softly kissing me, you push me to the ground and lay ontop of my body,
your passion is like that of a wild beast,

After our love, you smile so beautifuly, as you pick and blow the chaff from an ear of corn.

I love you so much, my cherrished sweet queen,
With you I am reborn...!


     

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (08-10-2003 11:46 PM).]

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arthur
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1 posted 2003-08-10 07:29 AM


lucky you

when i lay in fields i get stung
arthur

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2 posted 2003-08-10 07:22 PM


i remember a day when my heart felt a passion , she awaits on a thrown of jade , in my dreams we meet
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A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 2003-08-10 07:25 PM


Thank you for this beautiful, heartfelt poem..that was written especially for me...I have the original, handwritten version!  
I love you so much, my cherrished sweet queen,
With you I am reborn...!
my favorite line!


XXX Love~ARH



[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (08-10-2003 11:45 PM).]

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-08-10 10:12 PM


I feel like I "write" in the middle of a beautiful love story between you and the lovely ARH.

Your new photo is very charming, sweet prince of ARH!

Have you ever thought of writing a romance novel, Dear Rose of Gold?


EA

Goldenrose
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5 posted 2003-08-11 04:46 AM


Thank you for the kind words for my poem...

ARH it would not have been written without my love for you....thank you for being there for me....love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxx

Earth Angel..no i have never thaught of writing a romance novel..writing poetry taxes my brain enough...although i could write a book in the future...who knows?..thanks for the kind words..Goldenrose.


[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (08-11-2003 04:47 AM).]

A Romantic Heart
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passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-08-11 05:07 AM


oh my...how gorgeous! yes, very special indeed!
Goldenrose
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8 posted 2003-08-11 05:44 AM


Thank you for your kind words Dixie...they do inspire me to write more..

Goldenrose.

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