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Lost in a Thousand Notes
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Lost in a Thousand Notes |
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symphony_of_thoughts Member
since 2003-08-03
Posts 95Somewhere |
Worries take their toll I don't want them anymore Go to a cliff and give them a roll My happiness must exist galore I listen to the music Focus on the notes So many I can't pick On an ocean, like a thousand boats Cello, Violin, bass They all blend in one Taking their own pace The worries weighing a ton But lighter as the music flows I imagine many landscapes, unknown to my eyes As the orchestra continues to grow No more unknown lies The music has changed its tone Moods changing seemingly fast Instrumentalists gladly shown So fast, my mind lay towards past Beautiful, sad, happy, and glad I can't quite pick Never growing bad I will never grow sick Final bars carry out The striking final ending It will approach, I must not pout The audiences reaction pending Staccato breathes shorten their pace Like a thousand boats It's a majestic race Lost in a thousand notes |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The title you chose was really catching...brought me right into the theme of the write...treading water beside each line. Nice write. ThisDiamond |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
very nice write indeed I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away, |
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