Open Poetry #28 |
Morgana Le Fay |
Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I intoxicate the sleeping Plunge star laced dreams deep within an innocent chyld's veins The Goddess My Mother Avalon my blood Arthur's chosen I am a chylde Of the fey Cursed Bound Whilst the moon bleeds my name soul lost amongst the mist Stars crumble beneath my touch The earth trembles beneath my desire I am my own lover I am a chylde of the fey I am the daughter of the Goddess I am Morgana Le Fay If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-08-2003 03:23 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You rock! ~*~ I am my own lover I am a chylde of the fey I am the daughter ~*~ Oh yes! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-08-2003 03:24 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Words cannot say how good this is..I am in awe. Sandra |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I l0ved this..very..very much! insanity is not a crime |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
WOW!!I loved this. angelblueyes |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kris, you have outdone yourself, m'dear this is beauty . . . pure and driven from your pen to my eyes . . . *nodding* this is your best xxoo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kristen~ This is absolutely LOVELY~ Breathtakingly so~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
we need a blushing smilie yanno..thank you all If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
a reverant bow |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This poem immediately takes me back to the story "The Mists of Avalon." It could have been her who wrote it, which only means you wrote a great poem. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There's your smilie... |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Okay so I read this and didn't reply for some reason, so I read it again... Enjoyed both times, thank you for this awesome read It's hard to grow up and watch your friends remain in the same mindset that you left them in |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Raph... Sunshine... haha thanks Rhonda... it's okie I forgive you Munda... *smiles and nods* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-08-2003 09:01 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
we have a blushing smile: We also have this one which thanks to me is probably the most used smilie at pip: insanity is not a crime |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kris, thas ok - I know I am invisible up there for the love of God LOL breathe . . . |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
wow! i don't know what else to say... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ooo, Morgana! This was absolutely stellar! EA |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Sue... I sowwies!! Ed... Linda... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh god kris! this is gorgeous! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kris, this is absolutely beautiful. It has me speechless, and that is something rare for me. LOL It is awesome, Lady. I hope you don't mind that I'm going to keep it? Hugs Ethel |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
and queen of the nothern isles arthur |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Ethel... sweetie of course you can and thank you passing... thank you arthur... thanks for reading If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-09-2003 04:32 PM).] |
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