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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2003-08-08 06:12 AM


''It is time for me to go now my love, i will love you forever and always''.
My life breath exhausted and gone, i no longer inhabit this earthly world.

Passing through the long tunnel of pirecing serene light, a breeze blows scent of oranges and lemons into my senses.
My body it is warm not cold.

Hands and arms reach out to me as i make my journey.
Suddenly, blinding golden light makes me shield my eyes, as a wonder washes over me.

''Go back, go back to the world of mortals, your time is not yet over, go back with my love, tell them of what you see, go now and be free''.

Ascending as from a cool deep blue ocean, i surface and your face beams behind tears of sorrow, a miracle has braught me back to your loving heart and beautiful face.

The words of the lord echo in my mind, his glorious love for me so kind,his devotion unquestioned to all living beings, his power and glory and true amazing grace.

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-08-08 06:56 AM



...truly amazing grace.

Amen.

Suetang
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2 posted 2003-08-08 11:08 PM


Simply breathtaking.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Miah
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3 posted 2003-08-08 11:09 PM


A wonderful poem, thank you for sharing.
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2003-08-08 11:33 PM


[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (08-10-2003 06:15 AM).]

Goldenrose
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5 posted 2003-08-09 04:52 AM


Thank you everybody for replying...ARH...my love for you will last in this world and the next one...it will never die...i may die but my love for you will go on forever..love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-08-09 06:19 AM


Nice writing...James
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