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walker
Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2003-08-07 06:41 PM



No more this
or that
Only one thing
and nothing else
the wind
it roars
into the depths
leading to the solitude
of dreams
Safe feeling
the coldness of all
Painfully sufficating
as it glides
unselfishly
always giving but grinding the soul
Mark the hour
without minutes
we're born
we die
And I wait
and I wait
the unknown will soon be known
This moment is mine
and it makes me
and it shakes me
into the glory of none
Where I crumble to become whole
nothing more
nothing more
as the hour passes
with potential to bore
and I stumble
into me
and I hide
shamefully


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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-08-07 06:49 PM


I think I sent these words to you through telepathy...exactly how I am feeling.

Thank you for sharing
M

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-08-08 03:34 AM


This is amazing!
I apologize for missing your entrance
Welcome to PIP!
God, this flows right off the page
meeting my thoughts in the middle
xxoo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-08-08 03:41 AM


hey walker, i know just how you feel here

love the words you used to express it

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