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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2003-08-07 12:06 PM


She wore a little ruffled bib--
blue eye frost creased every line--
she dropped a menu in my face,
tacky with the grease of time.

Water, with three cubes of ice
and body of one dead green fly--
All of this beyond belief
Still, I'm not the least surprised.

"Look," I said, "It's not quite noon.
But still, I'd like a pint of ale."
From where I sat I smelled saloon.
Remarkably, her pale skin paled.

"Ah just cain't serve beer in here,
but I tell you whut...
Behind that door?
You'll find a floor
that needs some sweepin' up."

I followed glance and trail of ash
to a backstreet door.
She smiled with eyes in wink of sly:
"It's watchyer lookin' for."

"Thank you," I said with a smile.
"Don't thank me. Just hand me five."
I blinked and asked, "A five for tip?"
She said, "Nope. It's five for sip."

All my logic still prevailed,
protesting, "I've not drank of ale."
"It's for the water that you drank."
I looked at glass and my heart sank...

The glass was empty--almost dry--
but for three cubes and no dead fly.



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Toerag
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1 posted 2003-08-07 12:12 PM


LOL...I liked this one gal...
Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-08-07 12:20 PM



And the smile
is yours...
from me!

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-08-07 12:31 PM




HeeHee, you got a smile from me, Serene One  

Hugs, my friend  

Ethel

Jason Lyle
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4 posted 2003-08-07 12:38 PM


Eewww...you drank a fly... ...great write!lmao

Jason

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2003-08-07 12:49 PM


hmmm...I have had worse things..

I do not remember seeing this one before...so thank you for reposting and the laugh...

Susan

brian sites
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6 posted 2003-08-07 11:24 PM



littlewing
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7 posted 2003-08-08 01:12 AM


I want to know exactly what was behind that door?  This mind of mine thinks much to much K . . .
*smile*
there, happy? LOL
xxoo

Paul Wilson
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8 posted 2003-08-08 02:47 AM


Karen...Enjoyed the laugh...Paul

I'm glad it was you and not me
No dead fly in the glass
Just ice cubes numbering three

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

vlraynes
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9 posted 2003-08-16 12:52 PM



"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

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