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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-08-07 08:52 AM


Into Her Beautiful Eyes

When I look at her,
pleasure comes into my heart
and a smile upon my face.
When I touch her it soothes me,
as if I were touching the
texture of a beautiful rose
or the finest silk from China.
As I taste of her sweet kiss,
I experience both satisfaction
and a desire for more.
And as I gaze into her beautiful
eyes, I know she is the closest
thing to an angel that God has
ever put on this earth.

JamesLee
August07
2003

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2003-08-07 08:54 AM


Looooooovely! Charming!
An Earth Angel you have found ... and you see she already put a pair of wings to your heart.
Love, Margherita

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2003-08-07 08:56 AM


Beautiful...especially this line...

I know she is the closest
thing to an angel that God has
ever put on this earth.

~Thanks ARH

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-08-07 10:02 AM


Lovely words.
Eric

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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4 posted 2003-08-09 06:39 AM


Thank you Margherita, A Romantic Heart and Ericc for the nice responses...James
Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2003-08-13 04:13 PM


I have tears in my eyes, who ever this lady is  she is very lucky to have you.

Tequilia

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
6 posted 2003-08-13 04:20 PM


Wonderful write. TD
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