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ecrivan
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0 posted 2003-08-06 11:39 PM



How to get to know another party
when you ask what's in the bag
as you pilfer another for a fag
to learn said company is such a drag

A bag of lace is carried with grace
while one of leather toted by tethers
a tiny symbolic one may carry a regal seal
more combersome ones will load with orange peels


I live in a world of bags for all occasions
carried from shops with determined destinations
part of an ulplan to fill cultural voids
part of ulterior plans for humanoids.


Who can stuff their bags with fresh produce
or extract a fag to then deduce...
just ask your neighbour what's in the bag
pretend you're interested, or you'll be had.




[This message has been edited by ecrivan (08-07-2003 08:54 PM).]

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-08-07 12:02 PM


enjoyed,,,




ecrivan
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2 posted 2003-08-07 12:13 PM


here to poke fun at ourselves with all the different shapes and sizes that bags have become...and there remains those untold proposes


angelblueyes
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3 posted 2003-08-07 01:01 AM


Intriguing and enjoyed
angelblueyes

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4 posted 2003-08-07 02:03 AM


Martin, your poetry is always very interesting
and makes me think....which is a good thing!!  
Hugs  
Ethel

ecrivan
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5 posted 2003-08-07 08:56 PM


It is a good thing to get people to think..and I need to be part of those people too


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