dreams I didn’t (the rhyme of "...n't')

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lucky
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since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2003-08-06 10:32 PM

dreams I didn’t

behind this verse
was what isn't... that you I'm
looking at haunting me calling me
to a bed soiled with dreams I didn't
ask to see the two of us waiting at
a hospital nigh unto the dawn for
news that neither wants to
and I shouldn’t have
listened to
those

stillborn
dreams looking
past vacant eyes
too shocked too
tired to sleep
or think & I
couldn’t
close
my
eyes
and let
remember
fade and a new
begin cause it somehow

just wouldn’t
let me

TasteOfOctober
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since 2003-06-24

Posts 94

1 posted 2003-08-06 10:48 PM

neat effect, and better for what's said.

The only difference between the creative and the conformists is that the creative will not be conquered and the conformists already are.

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-08-06 11:25 PM

YOur words always speak volumes and great form.
angelblueyes

DawnG

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since 2000-06-23

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United States

3 posted 2003-08-07 12:17 PM

I really enjoyed the presentation and message of this poem.

Dawn

Marge Tindal

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4 posted 2003-08-07 09:30 AM

Lucky~
Oh my ... your thoughts catch me in their poignancy~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Ratleader

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5 posted 2003-08-07 10:00 AM

A beautiful way to say this dream.....good to see, good to read.

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Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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6 posted 2003-08-07 10:59 AM

Good Morning, Dale....Some dreams are so hard to dream, yet again.

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho

7 posted 2003-08-07 04:47 PM

TasteOfOctober
thank you, this was a lesson in the rhyme of "...n't" as I said. the story was of a time in my life back in '84 and the news was very sad to say the least.

angelblue
nice to see you again and thank you.

DawnG
glad youy enjoyed.

Marge Tindal
it's always nice to catch you sis.

Ratleader
glad to see your liking Ed means alot coming from you,

Martie
Yeah sis, some harder to write as am sure you know...
much love to you all, now I can water and feed the foul before they they yell at me any more.

dale

[This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (08-07-2003 05:17 PM).]

lucky
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since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

8 posted 2003-08-07 04:50 PM

Oops, sorry 'bout that... I'll be glad when
Rosemary's computer is out of the shop.

dale

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