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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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0 posted 2003-08-06 10:15 PM



Give away nothing

This is between us
so speak to me in signs
with the laying on
of hands searching
tenderness of skin

Tell Everything

In tongues and with
Lips wanting more
I am an audience
Of one captivated
By your charismatic
Desires

Promise nothing

Bare is essential
In the blending of two
Becoming one
Here
Upon our bed
Lie this naked truth:
As we live & breathe
So does our
Love...


~Tier


© Copyright 2003 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-08-06 10:32 PM


Tier? This is just stunning--

and my daughter has been hopping up and down behind me regarding this write--she is VERY into "anime'" (I think she's turning Japanese) and she wanted to me ask you about that, and oh, could you please send any urls her way (via me) and OH, wait--has this particular anime' been shown in the states yet? and? geeez...she really needs to calm down!

smile.

I loved the poem. I know nothing about anime' (much to my daughter's disdain) but if you do? PLEASE... e mail me?

Egads...

Loved your poem. smile. My daughter liked it too. (she is a member at Pip too--vashthestampede--she wanted me to tell you that)

sighs and smiles.

Enjoyed. Grin.

(This anime' must be good stuff?)


TasteOfOctober
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since 2003-06-24
Posts 94

2 posted 2003-08-06 10:36 PM


I don't know anythign abotu anime or whatever, but this piece is wonderful. i've read it three times tryign to keep up with how many thoughts and emotions popped and came to life in me as i read. thanx.

The only difference between the creative and the conformists is that the creative will not be conquered and the conformists already are.

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
3 posted 2003-08-07 12:11 PM


The becoming "One"...yes.

Tamashii, the soul, the eternal "self"

Great to see someone writing romance in the esoteric!


Ed
*bows*

Toerag
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Ala bam a
4 posted 2003-08-07 12:13 PM


Well done....romantic with religious overtones...
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2003-08-07 02:38 PM


I don't think anyone could beat
Serenity's daughter's enthusiasm
over this...

so I will just say...

loverly....

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2003-08-07 04:03 PM


"As we live and breathe so does our love."
James

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast
7 posted 2003-08-07 05:07 PM


Serenity & Vash! thank you, thank you! *smiles* and you've got mail!!

Taste of October, three times? Wow, thank you so much!

Wranx, I knight thee... (teasing)
*The lady does curtsey in acknowledgment*  

Toe, Good to see you again and thank you for the insight!

Sunshine, It's always good to bask in your light.  *hugs*

James, I kind of like that line too. Thank you for reading!

Thanks everyone, once again!

*hugs*
~Tier

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (08-07-2003 05:07 PM).]

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
8 posted 2003-08-07 09:45 PM


Tier . . .
I will admit, I know nothing of the title
but your words hold meaning for me that burn deep within in my own heart . . .
Beautiful
xxoo

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
usa
9 posted 2003-08-09 01:21 AM


and my knowledge of anime stopped at Akira

but this
is universal
and beautiful

thanks lady!

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