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kaile
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0 posted 2003-09-20 01:36 PM



why continue to suffer?

so you used pliers
to tear out the rotten tooth,
letting the bad blood ooze

a culmination of mind-numbling sadistic catharsis

you later made a show
of chucking it nonchalantly
into the bin

i had to bite hard on the gloss
and couldn't voice aloud,
"stay, give us another go. please"

but you were too far gone to hear anyway

© Copyright 2003 heng kaile - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-09-20 01:49 PM


gulp
even a megaphone won't help now
maybe she isn't listening anyway


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2 posted 2003-09-20 02:26 PM


In the end, it may be best that your pleas fell on deaf ears! It's time to go where you will be appreciated!


Linda

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3 posted 2003-09-20 02:33 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I'm so sorry to hear of your anguish, but I too believe you deserve so much more and if she won't listen then you are now free to seek what your heart desires and you'll get far fewer toothaches! (sigh) I send comfort hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Heng, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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4 posted 2003-09-20 02:42 PM


It's bad not to be heard that way, isn't it, Kaile?
Sorry.  
Ethel

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