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Thomas119gold
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0 posted 2003-08-06 04:59 PM



Four ways to look at you
such beauty can this be true
a blonde bombshell in blue
looking at you know who

I wonder what is behind those eyes
what thoughts start to tantalize
as they form from thoughts to actions
could I be one of the possible satisfactions

Friends I know are not
supposed to play toe to toe
but I look at those lips and that smile
my thoughts start to run wild

I fantasize about the pecs
oh I could end up a wreck
think about that Bottle
it becomes hard to slow my throttle

Your wise in your words
the pictures you add only throw more curves
your eyes visualize things
others can not comprehend

Only those to weak to understand
would complain and whine
your poetry is as beautiful
as the picture on my screen

© Copyright 2003 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-08-06 05:04 PM



Why Thomas, one would think
you've found a passion...

Very cute write...

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-08-06 05:05 PM


terrific penning,, very good thoughts...




Thomas119gold
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3 posted 2003-08-06 05:09 PM


I have PASSION for all that love to write and fear not to express their best and
unique style.

Lucky for me I don't have to name all my favorite writers. That could take awhile and I would have to explain why..
So I will just be a Rogue and smile.

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-08-06 05:45 PM


Nice...the last four lines say a lot...James
Margherita
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5 posted 2003-08-07 09:41 AM


We could call Passions "stirring pages" and your words confirm how deeply sometimes we are touched.
Very lovely.
Love, Margherita

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6 posted 2003-08-07 10:08 AM


....what a naughty boy was that.....

Nicely said, mon....a very pleasant poem for a morning when I'm an isolani. I've had these exact thoughts, but never wrote 'em down!

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7 posted 2003-08-07 10:22 AM


Thomas, this is so beautiful. Like you, I would hate to have to name all of my favorite writers here at Passions. Every one of them are special in their own way.
Hugs  
Ethel

Thomas119gold
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8 posted 2003-08-07 10:55 AM


All smiles here

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