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Suetang
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0 posted 2003-09-15 07:09 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

How will I be remembered
Long after I am gone
Will they cry at my funeral
When they play my favourite song

Will they say good things about me
Or will they remember just the bad
Will they remember all the love
That I had for my dear Dad

Will my words go on living
In the hearts of those I love
And will my spirit rise up high
Upon the wings of a dove

Will they welcome me in heaven
And will I be given my own wings
Will I hear the angels voices
And the sweet songs they sing

I hope I'll be remembered
And that my memory will live on
I hope to leave a good impression
Long after I have gone

I'm not afraid of dying
I cannot control my fate
But I know Dad will be waiting
When I arrive at heaven's gate

* * *

"We are all angels with only one wing.......
we can fly only by embracing each other."


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-09-15 07:14 PM


I would like to think that each of us will be remembered for the good things we did...
the way we treated our fellow man..
and you Sue...of course for your beautiful poetry as well!
This is lovely and reflective...
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ I love your glances meeting mine
     across forever or the room ~

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-09-15 07:27 PM


SueTang~
As with every penning you do ... this is done so beautifully~

I know that your beautiful poetry will be long remembered, poetess~
And ... you've always strewn a pathway of lovely flowers where you have been~
*Huglets*:huglets:
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com   

froggy
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Michigan
3 posted 2003-09-15 08:18 PM


This is beautiful Suetang.
Speaks to me in many different ways.

Thank-you for sharing it.

:-)

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-09-15 11:05 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, in every single poem and comment I've read of yours, every single thing you say is good and I know you will be remembered for all the wonderful and loving deeds you did, showing compassion for the less fortunate and celebrating for those who are happy! (kiss on cheek) You are a true angel on Earth and your father couldn't be any more proud of you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
5 posted 2003-09-16 01:15 AM


I would remember you as a ray of light always finding her way through a dark place while showing others that it could be done...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2003-09-16 05:19 AM


I have thought this so many times and come to the conclusion that I want my sons to have good memories to hold onto after I am gone...James
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