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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2003-09-13 11:15 PM

ring

within a ring

within

sleepy stretch upon the rock

ring

without--a spiraling--

float the ribbon--

shout the moan

low tones

of the viola

shuddering

no volunteer

sweet port

and the play of tongue

licking lidded eyes awake

wings upon the back of snake--

creation is upstream.

Float the ribbon

tunneling

one hand each
upon two knees
squatting
as the rhythms won

the Nile flows--upstream.

(she dreamed)

and spat rum to the fire.

Eyes betray the quickening

the fluttered hints of reckoning

There beneath the lid, I cry,

and pound impatience of release...

Pounding Poe to let me out--

awaiting my apocalypse

Rise! I rage

and sound my fist--

the judgement day has come.

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (09-13-2003 11:38 PM).]

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

1 posted 2003-09-13 11:22 PM

wow

WOW

awesome ms. starr... awesome

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-09-14 06:06 AM

YES...wow...and?...I'll be back to this
when I can think more clearly...grin.

Love ya, lady...
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2003-09-14 07:45 AM

WOW!

What I want to say I can't here... sheeesh Karen.

E me will you, my last email came back

hugs you

M

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2003-09-14 07:46 AM

er doin the library thing

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-09-14 08:27 AM

K?

ok this made me feel many things . . .
an awakening slowwww awakening
dreaming of swimming flying tired

creation is upstream.

as a salmon almost, and:

and spat rum to the fire.

as in disgust or finality

dreaming rapid wanting yearning
to be home, again
finally

You are beautiful, Lady K
and this is astounding
You make me feeeeeel
*smile*
xxoo

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-09-14 09:01 AM

Poe is pleased. Everything was upstream to him...life is hard, and you write the best of it. Dang it but I'm proud of you!

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