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Zinsser
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0 posted 2003-09-13 01:39 PM



Souls entwined
Wrapped in a blanket
Of a million stars
Brilliant glow of shared love
In competition with
The harvest moon
It seemingly celebrating
As are we
A perfect union

© Copyright 2003 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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1 posted 2003-09-13 01:41 PM



Beautifully said, Connie.  Enjoyed this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Margherita
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2 posted 2003-09-13 02:02 PM


Beautiful indeed!
Makes me SEE the scene and dream of it.
Love, Margherita

KoKo
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3 posted 2003-09-16 01:58 AM


This SO needs a bump. Echoing the 2 before me, BEAUTIFUL!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

icebox
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4 posted 2003-09-16 01:39 PM


Nice take on the Moon!
Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-09-16 09:06 PM




(smiles) This is so very lovely, sweet friend, may the harvest moon always radiate in your heart with all the other moons and cycle as you dance with love! (big hugggsssssss) This is a true classic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

NewEnglandlazurlu
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6 posted 2003-09-16 09:20 PM


This is wonderful. I love poems about the moon and of course romance!

Hugs, Marti

Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you.

Martie
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7 posted 2003-09-16 09:27 PM


Connie...The moond makes the landscape of the earth and mind, romantic.  This was lovely!
mytuesdaywishes
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8 posted 2003-09-16 09:43 PM


simple and elegant, real and ideal. wonderful work. :Þ

and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful.

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