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0 posted 2003-08-06 12:54 PM


You showed up at work today
and shocked me.
You said that I looked nervous
well I wonder why THAT would be.
We talked...
my break is supposed to be fifteen minutes;
today it was forty five.
I'm so comfortable with you still,
maybe that's the mark of a real friendship?
I don't know.
All I know is that when you kissed me,
I knew...
that I still love you.

And you know
that Friday's my day off...
and if I don't see you before then
(which is highly unlikely that I won't
since you're in town till that fire's out)
who knows what will happen.
You shouldn't have kissed me
and we shouldn't have enjoyed it
but you did anyway
and we did enjoy it,
and it's likely that it'll happen again
because I will not say no to you.

© Copyright 2003 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-08-06 01:59 AM


You write it very well. I'm going away on Thursday, but I'll probably call you tomorrow (that'd be Wednesday).  

*BUUUUUGS*

Kielo

I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me....

[This message has been edited by Kielo (08-06-2003 02:21 AM).]

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2 posted 2003-08-06 02:13 AM


I try to numb my emotions..it works for a while but funny how a simple kiss or even a dream...in general can turn us upside down and bite us in the urrr nose!?

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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3 posted 2003-08-06 02:14 AM


Awesome..I could feel it..
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4 posted 2003-08-06 02:40 AM


Rhonda, you wrote this so well, I felt like
I was looking in a window at you and him.
Hugs  
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-08-08 03:56 PM


Great writing Rhonda

Andy

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6 posted 2003-08-08 04:35 PM


Oh yes, it's that darn kiss of his! I know this all too well. Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
            Emily Dickinson




    

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