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Cap Convo |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Tap Tap Tap Soft on styrofoam; like missed claps are her hands. He finds her out in the open Cappuccino? His eyes rest on the pre-disposed waste. Now residing in its useful place in time. “Yup. The oversweet gas-station kind.” Her life has become absent-minded. You barely touched it. An obvious conclusion. “Yeah. I got busy. It got cold… story of my life.” A bitter statement and yet his search has reached her face and he can’t help but notice ..you’re still smiling? “My smile’s not a good gage.” |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
“Yeah. I got busy. It got cold… story of my life.” ~*~ I don't think you're going to have any trouble keeping readers, and marking them "Faithful", with writes like this. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
“My smile’s not a good gage.” (chuckling)...ah the subtle play of undercurrents in this... well done... indeed |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Sunshine and Cpat - Thank you so much! It means a lot coming from two writers that I greatly admire here. |
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