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smalls
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since 2002-12-20
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0 posted 2003-09-11 03:24 PM


Hahaha – I’m strong am I not
I could have sworn
I had all the confidence and charm
I could have sworn
That I wouldn’t be writing like this
I could have sworn
I had it under control
That girl made me think this
And that girl made me think that
But not her
Not my fantasy girl
Leaving me perplexed
At the holes in my demeanor
I laugh inside
At my thoughts of skepticism
My own biggest critic
Always seeming to be on her side
Smiling at me under her beautiful brown eyes
All this unaware to her
But running sporadically through my head
Maybe I’m not so tough
Just maybe I have found her.


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[This message has been edited by smalls (09-11-2003 03:26 PM).]

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Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

1 posted 2003-09-11 04:14 PM


I like the way this develops . . .
Hard Core meets Ms Solvent?
It happens.
But it's not a weakness, you know.

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