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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-09-10 10:43 PM



on a rainy day

rose petals drift on the breeze

alone and at peace


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angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-09-10 10:46 PM


I love this!!! It's going right into the library.
Crystal

SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-09-10 10:50 PM


Oh my...this is beautiful!!!!! Lovely words!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

vlraynes
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3 posted 2003-09-10 10:50 PM



You got rain today?  No fair?!  LOL
That's okay...we got a downpour yesterday.

Seriously, though...this is beautiful, Glenn.
Gave me a smile.

Hugs to you, my friend...

If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

LeeJ
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4 posted 2003-09-11 08:58 AM


stunning....made me feel that silence and tranquility...Good Morning, and how r u doing today?  Wishing you well.
Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2003-09-11 09:17 AM


Very Cool!  

Alone and at peace....I am jealous..

Susan

vandana
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6 posted 2003-09-11 09:41 AM


enjoyed
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-09-11 10:41 AM


Hi-Q!

Than-Q 4 Hi-Q!

Lovely, lovely, lovely.


EA

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24
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8 posted 2003-09-16 04:17 AM


I like this one!
SO soft and gentle!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2003-09-16 04:40 AM


I like rainy days...James
nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2003-09-16 05:22 AM


very beautiful thought Glenn. I walked through my garden yesterday morning trying to catch the last of the summer blooms.
My hibiscus are beautiful.

hugs
M

Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2003-09-16 09:27 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh my gosh, the imagery you offer is stunning, sweet friend, your breath brings potpourri into all your wonderful poetry and makes whimsical symphonies in result! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, one of your best yet, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Glenn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

icebox
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in the shadows
12 posted 2003-09-17 10:07 AM


Excellent!
EvocativeVerse2
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13 posted 2003-09-17 11:07 AM


Great haiku!
mysticpoe
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14 posted 2003-09-17 11:40 AM


amazing what 3 lines can say. Like one is able to enter that world-moment of the rose peddles solace. Nice - enjoyed.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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