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jellybeans
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0 posted 2003-08-05 02:54 PM


me you and her
the number three
sums up legitimize
nicely

dinner is served

I ate mine
you and she
were captivated
with each other

leftovers
were packed to take
home
all said and done
I’d rather eat alone


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-08-05 03:06 PM



Ditto!

jellybeans
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2 posted 2003-08-05 03:11 PM


sunshine yep lady knew you would feel the same *shrug*
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3 posted 2003-08-05 03:21 PM


Can't say I blame you there... I think I might have considered alternatives other than doggie bags... maybe leftovers dumped in her hair... just to shake that captivation a bit??? LOL

Eating alone is definitely preferable... some dinners are meant to be skipped altogether. *S*

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4 posted 2003-08-05 03:33 PM


Nice writing...James
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