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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-09-07 11:56 AM




It's not the mid-day
brightness

that's blurring your
vision

It's a glowness beaming
from me

as my eyes focus your
nearness

no the clouds have not
covered

my beaming smile

I disappeared with the
shadows


       

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-09-07 12:01 PM


Very nicely written Glenn.
~Hugs~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
   I still have sand in my shoes ~

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-09-07 12:14 PM


QjQ,
You disappear but not too far. LOL

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-09-07 12:17 PM


Awwww you did it again...If this isn't the sweetest..WOW...You top yourself every time!! Very pretty Q...thanks for always sharing the sweet ones!!!! Lovely as always!
A for you, and the one you are sweet on.


SharaRose @-->--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-07-2003 12:18 PM).]

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2003-09-07 01:33 PM


QjQ~
This is very nicely done~

Thank you for your individuality,
for being true to yourself ... and true to others~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com   

gemjop
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5 posted 2003-09-07 06:20 PM






made me smiiiile!

angelblueyes
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6 posted 2003-09-07 06:22 PM


This is great.Everyone at work calls me smiley, because they say I smile too much.
Crystal

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