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I Have a Head
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I Have a Head |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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I have a head created to use some of us would like to choose... to hold a mind above the eyes to turn upward towards the skies. I have a head, a space between my ears whose mind I pick to jostle my peers with temples to scratch for an idea or two decipher animal sounds at a local zoo. I have a head equipped with cavities for smell and have a proud curved nose whose origin does tell that the difference of an odor to another is no great feat discover the right pheromone to arouse you to your feet. I have a head with a chamber for taste to know what to digest and not to waste with teeth of white enamel still my own albeit I've lived on sweets until full grown. the head is for hair and hat to cover a centre for the senses all to discover the seat of mans sense of past and present, how to progress from the life of the peasant [This message has been edited by ecrivan (09-03-2003 11:49 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You tickle me with your humor, and dead on the mark expressions. Really great! TD |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Right on. Crystal |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
And inside that head is the brain and mind of a poet, creative, humorous, serious...my head enjoyed this offering from yours!!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thank goodness you do, Ecrivan - It's full of some pretty darned good stuff...  |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
LOL enjoyed Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Nan et al, Good thing there is something between my ears a wealth of images to share without fear. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
shaking mine and laughing you have a good one between your ears |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
the head is for hair and hat to cover a centre for the senses all to discover the seat of mans sense of past and present, how to progress from the life of the peasant Martin, you sure do have a brilliant head between those ears. I enjoyed reading this poem.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Martin! Ya have to admit ..we Canucks have a great sense of humour. This is fantastic...much enjoyed the read. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Nancy, Ethyl, Midnite, In this cruel world,lets be good to our minds take life less seriously for whatever we find |
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