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Skyfire
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0 posted 2003-08-05 01:50 AM


Oh hell.
You're back again.
I shouldn't even care that
she's hitting on you, but I do.
Get OUT of my HEAD,
but most importantly,
get out of my HEART.
You've screwed me around enough
and you come walking back into my life
which was doing JUST FINE
without you
thankyouverymuch.
Bugger off.
Just take your beautiful eyes
and your very very pretty face
away from me.
I don't want you.
But I still do.
And I feel my heart
B
R
  E
A
  K
I
  N
G
all over again

© Copyright 2003 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-08-05 01:53 AM


Wow, sky.. This is friggin' great!
vlraynes
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2 posted 2003-08-05 01:53 AM



Just ...lots of 'em.

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Bec
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3 posted 2003-08-05 02:00 AM


Hi Skyfire...

I know where you're coming from. Your words make me feel your frustration and pain. I know it doesn't help now, but nothing but time makes it better. Hang in there!

Bec

"Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley

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4 posted 2003-08-05 02:56 AM


had to laugh at the first two lines, but then the pain sunk in

good write

Marshalzu
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5 posted 2003-08-05 05:52 PM


Rhonda I just love this peice, it seems to me that it improves everytime I read it

Keep up the great writing

Andy(rew)

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6 posted 2003-08-05 06:14 PM


Rhonda, I don't know what to say, except Heart hugs to you, sweet Lady.  
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-08-05 06:17 PM


Oh, you know I know this...well, i'm actually dreading when this happens, hoping it won't, knowing it will. ugh.

I want to hide from him forever.

hugssssss

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Ceinwyn
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8 posted 2003-08-05 07:01 PM


Tell me about it!! *sigh*

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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9 posted 2003-08-05 07:06 PM


you made me smile with the
thankyouverymuch because I remember having a t shirt made with those words for a crafts person friend at a show I once did. He use to say that all in one breath to the customers.. so on his birthday I  gave him back his words

thank you for the memory

and hugsssss for your feelings
M

Kielo
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10 posted 2003-08-06 02:11 AM


I read them in reverse order. That has no relevance to anything.

*BUGS* ( )

I'll call you before I leave.

Kielo

I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me....

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