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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2003-09-01 10:19 PM


lands
sift fingers
tickle hands
all the plans
are fluid now
shifted
in the play.

which of us
did draw a line
erased
as if a sweet o-a-s...is
this all I can count on?

wicked genie laughs mirage...

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wranx
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1 posted 2003-09-01 10:24 PM


POOF!

~yeti

timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
2 posted 2003-09-01 10:26 PM


Dang!  After my escapades in the DM Forum, I thought this was about me....hehe,

great write Karen!


green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx
3 posted 2003-09-01 11:20 PM


Simple as that.  Great write.  Im adding it.

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

angelblueyes
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4 posted 2003-09-01 11:25 PM


Simple yet with such meaning.It truly is a blessing to read you my friend
Crystal

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2003-09-01 11:44 PM


Ahhhh...yes...my very bestest plans never made reality...you know, like the one about growing old with the person I married...

Sometimes that genie knows what she is doing..

Susan

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
6 posted 2003-09-02 01:30 AM



Hm...Karen?...

Love you, lady.

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
7 posted 2003-09-02 01:32 AM


hah! I dig this..

I diiiig it.

Saving..now..

littlewing
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8 posted 2003-09-02 05:47 AM


K . . . no oasis . . .
the dream is yours and
will be Lady K . . .
*smile*
no mirages . . .

xxoo

Cpat Hair
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9 posted 2003-09-02 09:47 AM


"poof"

the magic dragon lived by the sea...

oh no..wrong creature... the poof creature doesn't seem to have a melody.


Sunshine
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10 posted 2003-09-02 09:49 AM



*POOF*

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