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Open Poetry #28

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Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-08-28 02:33 PM

Gifts of the heart
Sound in the silence
View of the blind
Home of the mind
Last strains of sanity
Expression of the inexpressable
and ink of my soul
All these thoughts lie within
My gifted black ink pen.
.... or are they mine?

[This message has been edited by Tequilia_Sunrise (08-28-2003 02:40 PM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-08-28 02:37 PM

Well with or without the the's(grins) this is pure poetry

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2003-08-28 02:41 PM

yeah yeah............

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-08-28 03:07 PM

absolutely....along with praises and a breeze in the air...sent from a divine muse
Your poem is brilliant

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2004-07-05 02:37 AM

thankx everyone for your lovely comments

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