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Jason Lyle
Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-08-25 06:56 PM


I gasp
and claw for the
surface
knowing
that if I reach it
I am still
so far from shore
that my prayers
would be better
spent
on you

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2003-08-25 06:57 PM


then pray away...h
Gina Culliney
Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170

2 posted 2003-08-25 07:48 PM


Rough seas ahead?  Love this piece you created Darkling.  Well penned as usual.
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-08-25 08:32 PM


Your not so far Jason, but I could use a spare prayer . . .
xxoo

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