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green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
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New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-08-24 10:13 PM



Natural and normal
Spotted grey and white
Slightly imperfect
Collected as waste
Thrown away

Twice stained
Black just a little
Bound sturdy chains
Impassible post
Moral allien

Fault destiny
Harsh and useless vocabulary
Bone mass ajar
Tension with a touch of anger
Poor reasons train the temper

Digital obstruction
Try, attempt avoidance
My running space is smaller,
Smaller
A perimeter mass of steel

Free restricted
Pushing unwanted
Intelligence irrelevant
Needle arid haystack
My fathers prophesy comes true

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
wranx
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since 2002-06-07
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Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2003-08-25 01:22 AM


Better'n better, Craig
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
2 posted 2003-08-25 02:24 AM


These lines are priceless . . .

My running space is smaller,
Smaller
A perimeter mass of steel

xxoo

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
3 posted 2003-08-25 02:12 PM


Thanx you guys.  I think Im begining to learn a lil bit.

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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