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Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2003-08-24 11:00 AM



You just said goodnight
I just left your side
We said everything
Yet there was so much unsaid
Who knows what tomorrow has to bring
Does the day even have me in mind
As long as I have you by my side
The world holds no chains
I might have told you
Maybe I didn’t need to at all
Do you have to hear those words
Can’t my actions tell you enough times
Holding you until you sleep and beyond
The rose on your pillow just because
Running my hand down your back
The kiss on the neck
The candle I couldn’t afford
They all mean one thing
I should have said it then
Maybe I shouldn’t say it now
My whole world exists because you’re in it
Nothing has meaning without you
I know you want to hear them
Ditto won’t work this time
Only you know my heart
It belongs to you
For you anything
I love you

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

© Copyright 2003 Bradly Stott - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2003-08-24 11:26 AM


This is certainly worth the repost - Saying it yet again is a GOOD thing...
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2 posted 2003-08-24 11:34 AM


<The world holds no chains

My whole world exists because you’re in it
Nothing has meaning without you>>
====================
this is absolutely beautiful, Ringo...love these lines...gorgeous expression of such emotions...

sp  

just a hang-up call and the quiet breathing of our persian we call cajun on a wednesday...

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3 posted 2003-08-24 11:41 AM


My whole world exists because you’re in it
Nothing has meaning without you
I know you want to hear them


Oh, yes...Ringo, tell her again. No-one can
be told
too many times that someone loves them. Those
words never get old.
Hugs  
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-08-24 11:43 AM


Indeed ... saying those three little words is enough.

Oh mannnnnnnnn ... I am certain that reading this must have melted her heart.

Very romantic read here, thanks for posting it.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-08-24 11:51 AM


Brad - you know I understand this
COMPLETELY
*smiles*
thank you . . .
xxoo

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