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Torch Song
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Torch Song |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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nautical lawns....a season of shells ......tapping toes tickle ivory sands......pretty pictures.... long stemmed rose in vase...decoupage.....mixed bag.... a baker's dozen.....pocket full of rhymes......stacking shelves....love cut too short.....everclear.... starcrossed long distance love affair....candlelight bright....mourning the missing moon this night....whispers of light.....incandescent incantations...blowing softly these silent wishes... come back to me flowerboy, can i woo you home again? lay down your demons rest your fears on me, my heart beats estatic with buried treaures of you, scattered sentences.....stolen kisses....cherished moment......never to own it...silhouettes in bronze lockets..carved hearts on benches.... stitches of gold... caligraphy penned letters....sonnets in bottles....patchwork collages....laminations of love lamentations..... clutter and cobwebs....piles of dust and aspirations........ all just remnants cast ashore, souveniers and trinkets, they are only facsimiles nothing here soothes us for long, reaching and longing, for dreams that can't be, we can leave now, let me take your sweet hand, be my jesus, i will be your messiah, let us part the sea, come home with me, finally free, let us heal and be whole again [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-24-2003 08:07 AM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
WOW *bows down* You've written something quite amazing, here. Library. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
gee what a absolutely terrific fabulous wonderful penning, i'm completely mesmerized,, the serenade of this read has me dancing,,  [This message has been edited by QjQ (08-23-2003 10:56 PM).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
impactfull and stimulating michelle |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
BRAVO clap clap clap clap (standing ovation to you pretty Lady) always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele: this is pure beauty: we can leave now, let me take your sweet hand, be my jesus, i will be your messiah, let us part the sea, come home with me, beyond amazing xxoo |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michele - you continue to amaze me with your thoughts... BC |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michele, I love the way you write just as you see it...and you see it beautifully, lady.  Hugs  Ethel |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Burning bright this light sharing long heart's plight you write singing song |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I love where your mind takes me. Enjoyed. Maree  fate is not just |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks kauro, you WOW me too Q..so nice to mesmerize you rebellious....thanks for keeping it simple jannette....i will glady take the applause, thanks a bunch sue, so glad you liked this so much bill, if i can amaze you, i've done the job right ethel, thanks you for the nice words of praise craig, my friend, thanks - that is a real nice response maree, so glad a mind like this one, can take someone else on the trip |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Why dont you leave the flowerboy along and let the thoughts dry up and fade away. Its nothing more than an pleasant fantasy turned into an unpleasant reality. The write is good but misdirected my dear. |
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