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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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eye lids heavy weighed down by the pouring rain throbbing crying outside her window pane how can this be thoughts spilling over the paper cup of reality she thought she had a steady grip on obviously not sitting contemplating this life even the future tastes bitter when shaken not stirred today seems so distant yesterday a blur when she was so positive she had heard him correctly how daft can one be when she no longer listens to her dreams and when there is no doubt in her mind that there is NO such thing as LOVE but she swears she heard him correctly when he had whispered prematurely soft in her ear... eye lids heavy weighed down by a simple fickle brush of fate throbbing crying wondering why he hasn't called for weeks... how daft can one be? when obviously I love you...shouldn't even mean a thing If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-22-2003 08:56 PM).] |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
The matters of love make us so vulnerable, they have to, really. This just makes me ache...good writing, Ceinwyn. ~K~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
its never a sure thing even when u think you got it down ....... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kris . . . you know where I be  |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed your thoughts on love,,, |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
ceinwyn...Very touching write. Sadly enjoyed. If only we could take a pill to cure a heartache. Sometime I really believe that's why I write, to empty my heart of the ache it feels at times...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Kris! Now I understand your reply to one of my poems regarding washing your tears away. This kind of pain reaches to your very core--it can immobilize you and drain your spirit energy--as well as mental, physical & emotional!!! You deserve better treatment than this! You truly do, Dear One. Loving, healing hugs, Linda P.S. You did a wonderful job of expressing your feelings. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
*shaking head* I'm speechless. This was absolutely excellent.  Kielo wounded and broken and hurting.... what scares me is that I'm starting to just not care, except that I wish I could cry the pain away.... |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
< when shaken not stirred>> ================ these lines just struck me...the style just adds to it...captivating write... sp  just a hang-up call and the quiet breathing of our persian we call cajun on a wednesday... |
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