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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-08-22 06:30 PM



My head remains the same

eyes, mouth, ears

What I hear, the things I say

about all the things you won't let me see

. remains . the . same .

for that reason

Through every sense

that can make none of this all

you remain the same

realising I miss you regardless

of every nerve ending failure.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-08-22 07:35 PM



realising I miss you regardless

of every nerve ending failure.
oh yea, good stuff,
final remnants that cant be burned off


Instant karma's gonna get you.- it always does, it seems, doesnt it? gets us all though, if thats some consolation


Wind
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2 posted 2003-08-22 07:40 PM


heh heh heh. I'm here blue. THIS WAS GREAT. oh yeah. it is mine and you can't do anything about it. phhlt

Instant Karma's gonna get you
Gonna knock you right on the head
You better get yourself together

karma police, arrest this girl
her hitler hairdo is making me feel ill.
and we have crashed her party

Excuse me. thank you very much


insanity is not a crime

[This message has been edited by Wind (08-22-2003 07:41 PM).]

bklynboy
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3 posted 2003-08-22 08:02 PM


Well done.
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
4 posted 2003-08-22 11:27 PM


Wonderful, and true..so true.
Ceinwyn
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5 posted 2003-08-22 11:30 PM


now I have Instant Karma in my head...I feel like knocking someone right on their...umrph....ohh yeah sorry enjoyed the write...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Kielo
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6 posted 2003-08-22 11:34 PM


*nod* I'd say it makes sense, but I understand it too well to say something like that....

Kielo

wounded and broken and hurting.... what scares me is that I'm starting to just not care, except that I wish I could cry the pain away....

Janette
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7 posted 2003-08-23 07:40 PM


regardless

Yep, I have known that feeling, too.

You are sooooo good at expressing these kinds of emotions ... WOW

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-08-23 10:51 PM


Through every sense

that can make none of this all

you remain the same

realising I miss you regardless

of every nerve ending failure.



Gemma.....        

(did that help? I hope so!!)
Ethel Mae



littlewing
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9 posted 2003-08-24 12:35 PM


OH MY GOD
completely gem
xxoo

Krawdad
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10 posted 2003-08-24 12:42 PM


"regardless
of every nerve ending failure."

Nice finish.

Local Rebel
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11 posted 2003-08-24 02:07 PM


artificial sweetners often have a little bitter aftertaste....

a spoonful of sugar
to you
gem


ctowen
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12 posted 2003-08-24 02:18 PM


Nonesense sounds
better than being
totally
senseless


Chin up

and keep
your smile
burning

that makes
the most sense!

Aenimal
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13 posted 2003-08-24 11:23 PM


Damn you women you rock..which is amazing considering you're wankishness
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