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Imperfect Day |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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My eyes could no longer wait for the rain and began the cleansing of the spirit. The swelling will show until tomorrow when the coldness will be warmed by the gentle morning's breeze. My words will be forever sealed within these lips, their taste bitter, their surrender inevitable. So much time lost in love, never meant to be. I was abducted, then stranded too long... between the lines. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
"I was abducted, then stranded too long... between the lines." awesome! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"So much time lost in love, never meant to be. I was abducted, then stranded too long... between the lines." Amazing....fantastic write Maureen!! ~Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HeyBuddy~ 'Imperfect Day' There are those days that I think we're sharing the same wall calendar~ Today for sure ! *Huglets* hon~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
There you go tugging at the heart strings again. *hugs* If I could describe this poetically, it would be tender melancholia. Enjoyed this, Maureen. ~Tier |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "I was abducted, then stranded too long... between the lines good description of this malady, nice work maureen |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Awesome Maureen. You have captured pure emotion in words once again. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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