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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Seam split Flint and steel clouds Rattle spark over head But no rain Falls Down…. You brought the mottled bag Of hopes and dreams this way Second hand wishes Third eye blind And we sat Sorting colored scenes to shades Behind the spectrum of visible Grinding this one To mix with that Poultice applied You began to see First hand experience A third eye blur Of passing lasting memory Then came the storms Luminary columns Shaking the tremble of heart Chest ached longing For just one Drop Kiss me Again… And let it rain Or pour Let the wet season Start |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dang.... |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
WOW!!!!!! Crystal |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Kiss me Again… And let it rain Or pour Let the wet season Start Add another WOW to your collection. *G* And another... WOW! *S* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Let the wet season Start When did it ever end?  (YOU...why I oughtta...  ) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron Again you paint emotion into weather, as if you were a special kind of weatherman...using it to explain feeling, and so smoothly that it feels real. Such very good writing, my friend!! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Kiss me Again… And let it rain Or pour Let the wet season Start LOL...okay those lines right there make it what was asked....the wet season indeed..oh let it pour, let it pour, let it pour.... Thank you and if I had placed money on which you would choose...I would have won... Susan |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Captain, be careful what you ask for... *chuckling* loved this. ~Tier [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (08-22-2003 12:36 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Then came the storms Luminary columns Shaking the tremble of heart Chest ached longing For just one Drop Kiss me Again… And let it rain Or pour Let the wet season Start" Damn...just damn!! |
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