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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-08-21 12:29 PM


Tiny knots
keep the straightening at bay
and so
play hell with my symmetry

wishing upon the most feminine fingers
to untie quicker

nails break

they took so long to grow
and you so long to find

shoelaces are never simple
to a child.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2003-08-21 12:32 PM


and heart strings even harder for a woman
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-08-21 02:24 PM


they took so long to grow
and you so long to find

shoelaces are never simple
to a child.

Wonderful analogies, and a wondeful way about you.

  Hugs gemma, gemma~


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2003-08-21 05:33 PM


very cute...

M

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
4 posted 2003-08-21 06:11 PM


Beats velcro anyday!!

       ... though loafers are very relaxing.


     I guess someday our feet will be happy!


              ALWAYS  -  oxoxo

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
5 posted 2003-08-21 06:14 PM


Jesus, this is insightful gem . . .
no, I couldnt tie my shoelaces until kindergarten and now I wear sandals
what does THAT tell you?
*smile*
xxoo

Wind
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6 posted 2003-08-21 11:28 PM


then don't wear shoes. duh nice...real nice. knew you had one somewere in here

insanity is not a crime

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