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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-20 08:20 PM

Sing Me Clear

Joni Mitchell and Tori Amos
play concerts just for me
in this raining room
touching the black and white
whole notes of who I am
of where I find myself
singing the words that
are just below my breath
spin me sing me clear
as I live sadly beneath
the cracks of these lines

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

1 posted 2003-08-20 08:25 PM

Hell 1Slick_lady,
Beautiful poem.
Froggy

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

2 posted 2003-08-20 08:27 PM

Thats suppose to be " Hello" not the other.
Sorry about that as I missed the " O" on keyboard. :-)

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

3 posted 2003-08-20 08:37 PM

Raph once sent me tori amos, singing the stones 'angie'

it lulls me to sleep often, she's an angel.

and your words, go deep helen.

keeping this.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-08-21 01:53 AM

Like good blues ought to do, this one made me sad and happy at the same time....I think the happy part came from the quality of the poem itself -- very well done.

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S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

5 posted 2003-08-21 02:10 AM

"singing . . . sadly"

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-08-21 02:11 AM

Mmm Tori and Joni..
They rock my world..

a concert just for us.. lovely thought..

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2003-08-21 10:32 AM

Poetess~
You are stirring in this write~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2003-08-21 10:34 AM

I do believe except for your slender looks and red hair...we may be twins in feeling...

always a pleasure to read you, Helen

Maureen

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2003-08-21 10:35 AM

Ahhhh..the power of music...

Beautiful.

Susan

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2003-08-21 10:38 AM

Helen

That's the way of music. You captured it.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2003-08-21 10:40 AM

nice

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