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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada 
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Pulsing black hole unknown vacuum ceasing existence. I'm not here in the blanketed night. Brain waves function voluntarily. Yet, on another parallel the spirit cries for familarity. Stump, trapped in the ground. Roots reaching inward, outward fighting the suction. Finding the way, Craving the sun, Requesting to be seen. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific write,,, |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Wonderfully done  Crystal |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Tequilia_Sunrise - you are seen, when writing words like these. Nice write... BC |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Unusual subject challenging deepest thoughts. Cleverly penned! Enjoyed! 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Bloom where you grow, it is said. |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
Thank you everyone and BC your are a great poet and that means alot comming from you THANK-YOU |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
thankx everyone for your lovely comments  |
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