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VBallNut
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0 posted 2003-08-20 11:53 AM


A warm, perfect, starry night,
Rain falling down so light,
Sneaking away from our friends,
We hope this feeling never ends.
Ice-cold beers in our hands,
Making our stop at a lifeguard stand,
Sharing secrets for hours at a time,
Times like these are yours and mine.
Waves crashing upon the shore,
Gone are the street noises from before,
The lights behind us aren't a bother now,
We know our place is here somehow.

[This message has been edited by VBallNut (08-21-2003 09:13 AM).]

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SharaRose
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1 posted 2003-08-20 12:28 PM


Reminds me of those summers when I was young sitting by the pool from dawn 'til dusk talking to friends and the lifeguard always in the background. Thanks for the memories!!
Cute one!! Puttin' on the shades..
SharaRose @-->--

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Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-08-20 12:42 PM


Been there! Done that!--and I want to do it again! Thanks for stirring up some fun memories!--and you did it so well!


EA

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3 posted 2003-08-20 01:58 PM


Oh those romantic summers - ahhhh, loved this.
Ceinwyn
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4 posted 2003-08-20 02:34 PM


*smiles dreamingly* this reminds me of this past friday night....*sigh* lovely

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VBallNut
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5 posted 2003-08-21 08:41 AM


Shara Rose ~ Glad I made you smile, nights like this are few and far between.  Thank you for reading!

Earth Angel ~ You're welcome, as always. *smiles*  Thank you!

Mysteria ~ A romantic summer this definitely was.  This was last year and the first time my boyfriend and I went away together.  Memorable night with the deep talk we shared. Thank you for reading.

Ceinwyn ~ Hope your night was as memorable as mine was. *smiles*  Thank you!

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