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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-19 04:21 PM



Uneducated


I don’t
know anything
about love
but could
I practice
on you

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
icebox
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in the shadows
1 posted 2003-08-19 04:26 PM


Well, Nice Lady, practice can make perfect.  *smile*
S Arthur Grey
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woven by a poet's loom
2 posted 2003-08-19 04:36 PM


not so believable fiction, this
oh ya, poetry . . . ok then
practice practice practice

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3 posted 2003-08-20 02:04 AM


Icebox took my line, or was it his oh, this was too cute.
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4 posted 2003-08-20 02:52 AM


Helen, I do like this.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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where the wild flowers grow
5 posted 2003-08-20 03:43 AM


Yummy writing.
like strawberries from your pen

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-08-20 03:44 AM


cool write!
inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2003-08-20 06:49 AM


no dress rehersal required,
enjoy yourself!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression
8 posted 2003-08-20 01:12 PM



There is no book
To pull love’s learning
There is a look
Solitary yearning
It’s unrehearsed
And even worse
When Not noticed

Gloom

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