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Never To Be The Same
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Never To Be The Same |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Never To Be The Same there were flames that echoed across the sky as you were leaving turning into pillowed smoke and now every time I look I see clouds differently "I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wow... |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
ditto never be the same . . . ya know . . . I sometimes think that I can see through your eyes, but really, I just wish I could. impressed s.a.g. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
clouds bend through the light of yesterday and overcast the now blue of eye peeks through tomorrow |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my Helen, that was simply liquid gold, and Local Rebel's reply makes me want to request a duet of you two, when time permits. |
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alisa Member
since 2003-08-20
Posts 70Florida |
you take such simple things and make them amazing... |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You are truly a talented writer. Crystal |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - after we're never the same it seems, nice write... BC |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Well, that was a really good read. Thank you! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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