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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-08-19 01:13 AM



Like a controlled substance  
or a condiment used sparingly
spicing up my life
with just enough flavor
that keeps me coming back for more.
You are all that
without leaving a bitter after taste
served up on the side
like a wrap
that's as good as to go~

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littlewing
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1 posted 2003-08-19 01:43 AM


hmmm . . . exactly where do you buy your food Bluesy? LOL

*smile*
good for you
tweets
xxoo

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2 posted 2003-08-19 01:50 AM


Woo, that sounds mighty tasty indeed!

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passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-08-19 02:42 AM


sounds good to me!
idonthaveaname
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4 posted 2003-08-19 02:47 AM


great poem.. too much spice can lead to a ruined meal!
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
5 posted 2003-08-19 02:50 AM


I want what you're havin'..
lol

Duncan
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6 posted 2003-08-19 07:03 PM


Ya know, I've been thinking about spicing up the menu with some of these poetic culinary creations of yours!!!  Suppose I could talk ya into doing illustrations too???
Oh and make mine with an extra dab of blues...

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