Toasted Jam (people watching)

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Open Poetry #28

Toasted Jam (people watching)

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-17 03:38 PM

Toasted Jam

he looked
a little toasty
she seedy
strawberry jam
smooth and
easily spread
over taking dry
fixing burnt up
morning dreams
slicing off edges
making ugly
beautiful again

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-08-17 03:58 PM

simply amazing..i'm in serious need of that jam

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

2 posted 2003-08-17 04:13 PM

Sounds like a sweet tart...

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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2003-08-17 04:23 PM

Oooh, you beat me

Damn good, sweets.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2003-08-17 04:55 PM

oh, oh OH...

just EXQUISITE...

I am smiling so WIDE here...

reading these I can actually feel the love of people for people, and yes, I like life that way.

Thank you, h.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-08-17 05:46 PM

*smile*

only you would write of people like this
only you Helen . . .
Amazingly well met
xxoo

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

6 posted 2003-08-17 06:44 PM

gorgeous

-majnu
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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2003-08-17 08:00 PM

Wow...the magic of your words!
Eric

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

8 posted 2003-08-17 08:25 PM

*smile*

When I was very young, the toast I ate was usually the burnt toast no one else wanted. I learned to like it that way and eat burnt toast to this day. My favorite is with jam.

Thanks for sharing.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2003-08-17 09:48 PM

decadent and delicious, yummy!!!!!!!!

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

10 posted 2003-08-17 11:03 PM

The visual of a "toasted" man was just fabulous.

Enjoyed.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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