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ctowen
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0 posted 2003-08-03 02:43 PM


Missing

that which gives
pleasure

wishing

a raspberry treasure


To taste
is to take

fresh air

not waste
inhibitions
that bare

Breathe deep

honey and fruit
scent

to sleep

after such air
is spent

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure.   -   C. Belville 02

© Copyright 2003 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
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just out of reach
1 posted 2003-08-03 04:27 PM


I think that is the best sleep ever! well said, Chris



"The suspense is terrible.
I hope it will last!"
-Gene Wilder as Willy Wonka



    

gemjop
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2 posted 2003-08-03 06:37 PM


Craig, that was like breathing in heaven.

good to see you, as always.

into my library

gem
xxxxx

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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Gaia
3 posted 2003-08-03 08:17 PM


tasty piece, Craig
and I absolutely adore anything raspberry

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-08-04 12:57 PM


mmm, wonderful write
scuffedshoe2
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5 posted 2003-08-04 01:07 AM


It was like being beaten with a pillow made of clouds

-ian

Kahlil
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6 posted 2003-09-06 02:10 AM


well this is yummy!  ~K~
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7 posted 2003-09-06 02:11 AM


Gah, this helped me breathe.
Kethry
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8 posted 2003-09-06 02:24 AM


Breathing deeply of this rasberry scent
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



gemjop
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9 posted 2003-09-06 09:57 AM


OOOh good to read this one again....


Midnitesun
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10 posted 2003-09-06 11:46 AM


Enjoying a second breath of this one, Craig.
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