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In my Dreams |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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Colors swept up in the wind changing the course of my direction across the distant sky you've flown like a lover stirs my senses. How I miss you when you're gone as the sunset falls into the ocean when the night becomes my light I conjure up your dream and hold on tight. Wrapping forever around my heart reaching higher than before you are the catcher of my breath distant as the silence that I keep. Stepping out under the moonbeams descending in a moonlit dance your star hangs in the balance and casts a never ending trance. Watching for your eyes to feel the love under your spell turning the clock back then, to now making wishes in my dreams I'll never tell. ~*~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BluesSerenade~ I like this ... of course, I LOVE secrets~  'I'll never tell' *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
what a beautiful write I loved these lines: How I miss you when you're gone as the sunset falls into the ocean when the night becomes my light I conjure up your dream and hold on tight. Wrapping forever around my heart reaching higher than before you are the catcher of my breath I really enjoyed this one & look forward to more |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
ill never tell either,,,,,, and dont u tell mine !!!!!!!! okiedokie? beautiful dreamer and beautiful dreams |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"How I miss you when you're gone"...yes, so true, and so strong...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Stepping out under the moonbeams descending in a moonlit dance your star hangs in the balance and casts a never ending trance. I love these moonlit dances. Don't you?  Hugs  Ethel |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh how beautiful, vital, and strong...a poem filled with the eyes of morning, streaching out to greet us, warmth and love...thank you for sharing |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori...love and longing, beautifully shared. Your writing touches me as it is personal, yet I know. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Wrapping forever around my heart reaching higher than before you are the catcher of my breath distant as the silence that I keep." Some beautiful poetry from your heart this weekend Lori. Sweet inspiration...  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You dream very well...  Huggums, Linda |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
perfect--as always! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
How I miss you when you're gone as the sunset falls into the ocean when the night becomes my light I conjure up your dream and hold on tight... enjoying your words, wishing my dreams would hold tight hugs M |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You're a beautiful dreamer....thanks for sharing this one. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lori, I don't tell either....but seldom do I dream something that is so risque that I need to... part of age? Nahhhh.... I knew from your title that I would enjoy this poem. I was not disappointed! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wrapping forever around my heart reaching higher than before you are the catcher of my breath distant as the silence that I keep. Awesome write Bluesylady! hugs, Chris |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh, how beautiful...gee, I wish I had a someone that I actually missed when he is gone...Ooops, I guess my wish won't come true, I told. LOL Lovely writing! Patricia |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks so much everyone! A dreamer she be!  Here's to yours, may they be sweet. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Lori, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me cry as I share these same feelings and dream of holding my loves hand outside of my dreams where she is always bubbling like a lava lamp! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I had a good time with this write...the first lines of each of the verses go together just perfectly, the second lines, third, and fourth...strange why I wanted to read it that way...first line of the first verse, first line of the second verse, first line of the third verse and so on... really neat |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Wrapping forever around my heart reaching higher than before you are the catcher of my breath distant as the silence that I keep. This is just beautiful... I especially love the "catcher of my breath"... lovely! *S* |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Some gorgeous lines in here. I dream the same way. Hugs Sandra |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Beautiful....but then you have that flare in your pen! I really enjoyed this one |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
quote: Mercy Lori but you know how to find the words that take my breath away as well. This was almost bittersweet in a way, in that one would feel that strongly perchance the ties be broken - oh my, a beautiful write nonetheless. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What beautiful dreams... TD |
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